Friday, June 22, 2007
I sit ...
I sit aloneWaiting for youWhy have you left meWhat did I doI begin to trembleBut I will remain calmMy calls are not answeredSo I stand up aloneAs I look downA lifeless body still thereIt could no longer handle the painThe heart and soul had dealt out It stood up comatose and emptyAs it agonizingly walked into the distanceI decided it was for the better, of both it and meWe could no longer hold each other back
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no better wordsI'm....*dumbfounded*That's awesome.
dumbfounding and awesome?I am afraid you are to easily impressed...Thank You
Someone emailed me on this one...apparently it's isn't as obvious as I thought. Read it from the bottom right to left top...backwards.
Hi you dont knowme but I just wanted to let u know that was such a nice poem it was so sweet. I just wanted to say that, I also write poems if you want to hear some e-mail me: pschochic262@hotmail.com
Thank you.
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